Preliminary exercise feedback - strengths and weaknesses

Good points

• Different variety of shots was good.
• Clear and creative story line.
• Match on action was used effectively.
• Editing was good, invisible editing was in practice.
• The music was appropriate for the story line.

Bad Points

• The lighting varied between shots.
• Music was maybe a little too fast for the scene.

Improvements That I would make.

• I would change the lighting, through editing techniques
• I would also include a more complex ending, rather than leave the scene on a cliffhanger.
• Use slower music at the end of the scene.